Friday, July 3, 2009

[Fiction] Friday Challenge

Fiction Friday

[Fiction] Friday Challenge for July 3rd, 2009:

Where your character is committed to a drastic or extreme change

What am I doing? Am I really packing this bag? I mean, this is not something I normally do. Really! This is me, Janie we're talking about here. Okay. Breathe. Why the hell can't you run off to art school in London? Lots of other people do crazy, impulsive things and no one bats an eye. But God forbid Janie fall one step out of her perfect life's lines, heaven help us! The world is coming to an end! Oh, screw them all!

With confirmation in her throw, Janie sweeps her duffle bag onto her shoulder and storms out of the room--of course, banging into the door jam a couple of times in a manner that still kept her defiant tone intact. Once into the hall, she slams the door to her dorm room, and quickly rushes through the hallways into the community room and through into the open air. The bright green lawn and electric blue sky seems like it was ripped from the college catalog and hung up for the world to see how amazing of a school this is. It seemed to mock her, "How dare you leave such a wonderful, institution! As if you're better than us. As if you're going to do any better anywhere else. You'll be a failure." Flipping off the sky, and her beautiful Ivy League campus, Janie gets into her car and takes off for the airport.


"Wait, there's a problem." she says to herself. "What do I do with this freakin' car?" Apparently she hasn't thought through ALL the details yet of this plan. But hey, that's okay, right! It's an adventure... no, more than that! This is what I am meant to do with my life... the car will survive.


She stops in front of her best friends house, writes a note, attaches it to the pink slip and registration, sticks it in her mailbox, and calls a taxi. Problem solved. Okay, let's see what you can throw at me next life, she thinks.

But really, Janie's adventure hasn't even begun. Literally (she hasn't even gotten to the airport for goodness sakes) and figuratively.

2 comments:

  1. this is fun. would love to read more.
    xo,
    lu

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  2. I enjoyed the humour to injected into your story – the physicality easily translated through your weaving of Janies predicament. Wow – that’s some change – and drastic too. Good for her – follow your passion. To hell with everything else.

    Many apologies for my tardiness on giving feedback – I have been without the internet for a lifetime – a fortnight. Visitors can find my FF for 3rd July here - http://annieevett.blogspot.com/2009/06/your-essence.html

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